Mountain_KingNaja, das Lied steht mehr oder weniger und dies hier ist das Grundgerüst für den Taxt. Der Song geht so richtung Savatage/Tesla/Metallica Halbballaden.
Wer Fehler findet, bitte hier reinschreiben. Wie gesagt, dies ist nur ein Grundgerüst und vielleicht habt ihr ja n paar Ideen, weil das ganze ja doch noch etwas platt und stellenweise holprig klingt.
Enough For Us
We are……your escape
We are……your last embrace
We are……your feeling´s face
We are your mouth, your ears, your eyes
So start to realize we are your lifeDo you feel the waste inside your soul
You want to hide from the control
But you even hide from life
Now livin´ in chaos and confusionYou want to run away from here
You feel the pain of endless fear
Still searching for a place to hide
But there is no solutionYou see only black around you
Eternal darkness surrounds you
But you can find a way out to
your own lifeThis world is just a shame
We need someone to blame
For all the things they´ve done
By trying to become
Our masters, our guides
trying to teach what is right for us
But this was getting enoughSo try to understand us…….This was getting enough
So don´t deny to help us…..This was getting enough
So please support us……….This was getting enough
SO COME AND FOLLOW US BECAUSEWe are……your escape
We are……your last embrace
We are……your feeling´s face
We are your mouth, your ears, your eyes
So start to realize we are your lifeYou see only black around you
Eternal darkness surrounds you
But you can find a way out to
your own lifeThis world is just a shame
We need someone to blame
For all the things they´ve done
By trying to become
Our masters, our guides
trying to teach what is right for us
But this was getting enough
Das waren die kleinen Fehler, die ich beim Lesen entdeckt habe. Du meinst mit „But this was getting enough“ quasi „Jetzt reicht’s“, oder? Jedenfalls wäre das nicht korrekt übersetzt, das müsste eher „It’s enough now“ oder sowas in der Richtung heißen.