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You tryin‘ to mess wit‘ me bro‘? Better don‘ mess around here ‚cos you’ll be gettin‘ some ass-whuppin‘ 😈
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Would you please stop that Nigga-English?
Butty Boys! 👿
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Hi
Is someone online who wants to correct my English texts which I wrote to learn for the English test tomorrow?
At the moment I’m sitting in the computer-room of my school. 🙂
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GrindelwaldHi
Is someone online who wants to correct my English texts which I wrote to learn for the English test tomorrow?
At the moment I’m sitting in the computer-room of my school. 🙂
If this text ist not too long, i will try it 😉
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Summer Breeze ´10The texts haven’t been written yet, but I’m writing them now. So in a few miniutes I can post one of them. (A text about food additives.)
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GrindelwaldThe texts haven’t been written yet, but I’m writing them now. So in a few miniutes I can post one of them. (A text about food additives.)
Ok, I will try it, but I can not promise something 😉
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Summer Breeze ´10I think „anything“ would be better here
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"Wäre Hertha BSC ein Yoga-Verein, hier wär alles blau-weiß." "Ask not what you can do for your country. Ask what's for lunch." Den Arm aus dem Fenster, das Radio voll an, draußen hängt ein Fuchsschwanz dran...SkullkrusherI think „anything“ would be better here
Yes, you’re right.
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Summer Breeze ´10Thank you. I only need a few people who read through it and say me the biggest misstakes. (And also little misstakes, which aren’t really misstake, but just sound not good.)
Text number one:
Food additives are necessary to protect consumers from harmful bacteria and to extend the shelf-life of a product. They also have a cosmetic effect, like adding colour and flavour. Productions is much easier with food additives and they may improve the quality. For example, bread is often enriched by vitamins.
These days you can’t be sure about what you eat, when you eat something out of deep-freezers oder tins. For sure, there are labels on the products, but many of them will be meaningless to you.--
I can also have a look at it.
Four eyes see more than two.--
MetalEschiI can also have a look at it.
Four eyes see more than two.ESCHI! I hoped that you are online. ^^ 🙂
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Kill ‚You tryin‘ to mess wit‘ me bro‘? Better don‘ mess around here ‚cos you’ll be gettin‘ some ass-whuppin‘ 😈
ass whuppin? you? me? oh god now youre getting hilarious 😉 hehe have you guys ever heard somebody saying „i want to BECOME money?“ thats darn funny im telling ya ^^
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GrindelwaldThank you. I only need a few people who read through it and say me the biggest misstakes. (And also little misstakes, which aren’t really misstake, but just sound not good.)
Text number one:
Food additives are necessary to protect consumers from harmful bacteria and to extend the shelf-life of a product. They also have a cosmetic effect, like adding colour and flavour. Productions is (1) much easier with food additives and they may (2) improve the quality. For example, bread is often enriched by vitamins.
These days you can’t be sure about what you eat, when you eat something out of deep-freezers oder (3) tins. For sure(4), there are labels on the products, but many of them will be meaningless to you.(1) Production is much easier
(2) they can improve
(3) or
(4) of course or surely (For sure means „I personally have no doubt about the fact, but in this case it leads an incontrovertible fact)And one question about the content:
What do you want so say with your last sentence?
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And now everyone ignores my text? 😥
Edit: ups ^^
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GrindelwaldThank you. I only need a few people who read through it and say me the biggest misstakes. (And also little misstakes, which aren’t really misstake, but just sound not good.)
Text number one:
Food additives are necessary to protect consumers from harmful bacteria and to extend the shelf-life of a product. They also have a cosmetic effect, like adding colour and flavour. Productions are much easier with food additives and they may improve the quality. For example, bread is often enriched by vitamins.
These days you can’t be sure about what you eat, when you eat something out of deep-freezers oder tins. For sure, there are labels on the products, but many of them will be meaningless to you.edit: Ok, Eschi was faster than I. 😉
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Summer Breeze ´10
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